Before
 Welcome to the Barbican
 A world-class arts and learning centre, the Barbican pushes the boundaries of all major art forms including dance, film, music, theatre and visual arts.
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  After
 Welcome to the Barbican
 Dance. Film. Music. Theatre. Visual arts. Whatever you’re into, you’ll find it here.
 Explore >
  What’s not working?
  - It’s a description, not an invitation: the Barbican is a world-class arts and learning centre, not Come to the Barbican
- It’s all about us, with no mention of the visitor
- It sounds a little elitist: world-class, pushes the boundaries, major art forms
What’s changed?
  - Replacing formal, elitist language with warmer, more everyday phrases: major art forms => whatever art you’re into
- Using single-word sentences to suggest rhythm and confidence: Dance. Film. Music. Theatre. Visual arts.
- Using a call to action — Explore — to really welcome visitors in