The Barbican is open to everyone. So our language needs to be open to everyone too.
If some people can’t understand what we’re saying, they won’t want to spend time with us.
Everyday words mean we can reach more people. That’s important because:
Using everyday words makes our writing more accessible to people who might not think the Barbican is for them.
Remember: nobody likes reading long-winded, complex writing. Not even sophisticated or ‘expert’ readers.
Using the third person (‘the Barbican’, ‘visitors’) makes us sound distant. ‘We’, ‘you’ and ‘our’ make us sound warmer and more open.
The Barbican works with corporate partners => We’ll work with you.
The Barbican library is open from 9am => Our library is open from 9am.
We use contractions all the time when we’re speaking — like ‘it’s’ and ‘you’ll’. Using them in our writing helps it flow naturally.
We will help you take your seat => We’ll help you take your seat.
Talking about art and culture means we sometimes need to use complex language like ‘twelve-tone composition’ or ‘abstract expressionism’.
That’s not a problem — so long as we ask if our reader might need more information (like someone new to classical music).
But we need to watch out for ‘artspeak’ words like ‘interrogate’ or ‘notions’. They make us sound stuffy and academic, which puts some people off visiting.
Try to translate ‘artspeak’ into simpler, more everyday language:
This exhibition interrogates contemporary notions of masculinity => What exactly does ‘masculinity’ mean today?
If you spend all day inside the Barbican, it’s easy to forget that real people are going to read your writing.
So once you’ve finished writing, take a mental trip to Old Street. Show someone your first draft, and ask yourself:
If the answer is ‘yes’ (or even ‘kind of’), you’re probably on the right track.
If the answer is a ‘no’, it’s time to revisit.