Before
Life Rewired will interrogate how artists are responding to a time when technology is simultaneously enhancing our lives and challenging our identity by creating machines with human characteristics. It will explore how scientific breakthroughs can affect us at every stage of our life; from expert and first-person perspectives on IVF to the personal and societal impact of lengthening life expectancy.
After
Faster. Smarter. Scarier.
Get to grips with the tech revolution at Life Rewired. From IVF to AI, discover how technology is making our lives better — and more uncertain – than ever before.
What’s not working?
- Formal, slightly academic ‘artspeak’ words: interrogate, simultaneously enhancing, first-person perspectives, societal impact
- Long-winded, hard-to-read sentences: it will explore how scientific breakthroughs can affect us at every stage of our life…
- There’s no mention of the reader — or what they can do and experience
What’s changed?
- Opening with short sentences to build rhythm and excitement: Faster. Smarter. Scarier.
- Using calls to action to draw the reader in: get to grips with the tech revolution, discover how
- Removing formal ‘artspeak’: interrogate, societal impact, first-person perspectives